第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）

第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

  假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

  增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

  删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

  修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

  注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

    2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It was a busily day at the grocery store .Two girls were in line before me with balloons.

They appeared to be in hurry So I asked if they wanted to go ahead of me. They were very

Thankful .One girl said she had a nephew and something badly Happened to him at birth .The

balloons were for his birthday They Were chatting together with their rush to get all the

things done for the party because everybody offered to help, I offer to pay for the balloons.

They refused at first and I insisted I said “Tell your sweet nephew that there're still nice

People leaving in this word ”They thanked to me again and again That little acts of kind-

ness made them feel good and It also brightened my day!

第二节书面表达（满分25分）

  假定你是李华。你在网上看到在你市工作的英国人Rose发布的广告，说她想找一个陪跑族，并且愿意为此支付费用。你很感兴趣，请给她写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

  1．自我介绍；

  2．询问相关事宜；

  3．希望被录用。

  注意：1．词数100左右；

    2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

    3．开头和结束语已为你写好，不计人总词数。

参考词汇：同伴companion

Dear Rose，

I'm Li Hua ,a 26 year-old man working as a professional bodybuilding trainer

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Looking forward to your early reply!

Yours,

Li Hua
英语学习  /english/